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Fragile heart by ~kandykim:iconkandykim:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




My head once so level,
can't seem to decide.
My mind is so confused,
so in you, it confides.

My soul is slightly jaded,
it once glowed bright.
These days it shines again,
you bring me light.

My legs are weary,
from running from it all.
They can't support me any longer,
so you catch  me when I fall.

My eyes were filled with emotion,
but they've seemed to run dry.
I don't need the tears anyway,
because with you I never cry.

My hearts a little fragile,
after all its been through.
But none of that matters now,
because all it loves is you.
©2004-2009 ~kandykim
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Author's Comments

I just decided to write something new. I haven't wrote anything in so long, so take it easy on me =P

Comments always appreciated

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~soulburntdown77 Apr 6, 2004, 2:46:16 PM
:tears: I love it Kimmies!!! You're the bestest.. I'm gonna fave it because it's like a dream that hasnt come true yet.. =\

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Hope you're alright..It's been rough for me
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~kandykim Apr 6, 2004, 2:54:20 PM
Aww, Gina! I love you hun! :hug: :hug: :hug:

Your the bestest, and anyone should be lucky to have the love of my Gina!!!!!

:couch: :plug:

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
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~xureal Apr 6, 2004, 3:02:00 PM
Dreams dont come true.

This is pretty cool Kim, i like the play on words you used in this. Nice job.
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~kandykim Apr 6, 2004, 3:49:39 PM
It all depends on what you dream. What do you want to come true that hasn't?

Thank you for the comment RJ! :lick:

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
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~greek-freek Apr 6, 2004, 4:15:56 PM
I like this one a lot Kim! I like the whole point of this... Awe, love it's a mother fucker sometimes.

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Now your in my world
Did you dream it'd be so small
My little box was perfect
Until you destroyed it all.
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~kandykim Apr 6, 2004, 4:19:07 PM
Thank you very much Kayla! And yes, love is one fat assed mother fucker sometimes...=P

I can't wait to see you guys at APC!!! :dance:

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
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~zedman Apr 6, 2004, 5:37:18 PM
Lovely poem. I don't know what else to say :\

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"WinD'OHs -- OS of Homer Simpson" -- Shane Semler
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~CiCaTr1z Apr 6, 2004, 5:44:25 PM
interesting...

at this age i believe love is bullshit. Call me a pessimist. I think you can come close as hell to it, but truly being in love is going through everything and coming out in each-other's arms. Until you go bankrupt and live on the street and still stay together or something, i don't think you are actually in love. I mean, look at the fucking divorce rate. Its like 70%.

good poem, my ranting has nothing to do with it other than the concept.

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I win, because you lose!
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~kandykim Apr 6, 2004, 6:42:19 PM
Thank you very much for the comment :-)

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
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