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Scalpels and Stitches by ~kandykim:iconkandykim:





A twisting dream,
I cant explain.
It swallows me up,
a blank face with no name.

Why this follows me,
it chases me at night.
Just as I struggle free,
they corrode my sight.

Clawing at my skin,
gripping to pierce through.
Holding my eyes open,
and they reveal me to you.

Bleeding and screaming,
you watch the torture.
I strain against the light,
to see your fading figure.

Tap into my spine,
and tear out the tissue.
It was you with the knife,
you killed me too.
©2004-2009 ~kandykim
:iconkandykim:

Author's Comments

Just something I wrote the other day...

Comments always appreciated!

Stock from porchstock

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:iconimmortalslayer:
Oh, wow. this is great. Browsing around in the dark poetry and the title to this one jumped out at me. Lovely imagery!

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~Obey-Me

I used to stand for something
Now I'm on my hands and knees
Traded my god in for this one
And he signs his name with a capital G
:iconkandykim:
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it =D

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
:iconimmortalslayer:
anytime!

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~Obey-Me

I used to stand for something
Now I'm on my hands and knees
Traded my god in for this one
And he signs his name with a capital G
:iconcicatr1z:
The picture scares me, the poem however is By far the best yet kimmie, i told you i liked this one the most. so, you guessed it!

:+favlove: :+favlove: :+favlove:

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I win, because you lose!
:iconporchstock:
great wording, full of interesting thoughts. keep it up
like how you used my stock :+fav:

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:iconkandykim:
Thank you very much for posting the stock!!! And thank you very much for the comment and :+fav:

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
:iconkandykim:
Aww! Thank you so much! It makes me happy that you liked it! =D

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..
:iconbraceletsofsmoke:
dark. works well this poem.
:iconkandykim:
Thank you very much =D

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What nourishes me, also destroys me..

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